對比型作文結(jié)尾段
一比較型作文
(一)比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。
說明式比較在比較過程中,作者不發(fā)表個(gè)人意見,在文中不體現(xiàn)個(gè)人取向,單純以說明介紹為目的。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣,闡明自己立場為目的,一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
(二)比較論說文一般有兩種模式:
1.首段:明確擺出自己的立場。主體部分:通過運(yùn)用比較,對比等手段,進(jìn)一步說明自己取向或偏好的原因及正確性。結(jié)尾段:重申立場。
2.首段:只引出現(xiàn)象,對個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)予以保留。體部分:進(jìn)行對比。結(jié)尾段:自然而然地得出論點(diǎn)
作文題目
1.MakingFriendswithPeopleofsimilarordifferentpersonalities?2.AdvertisementorQualityofProducts?3.LivingAloneorLivingwithRoommates?4.CompareUrbanAreaswithRuralAreas5.ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?6.CompetitionorCooperation?
7.BookKnowledgeorPracticalExperience?8.CommunicatingbyTelephoneorbyLetter?首段
I.首段=引言句+主題句
引言句:引出比較的對象,主題句:提出主題,明確表明作者的個(gè)人取向或偏好。引言句一般為與作文題緊密相關(guān)的社會背景,現(xiàn)實(shí)狀況或是時(shí)下人們對某一事件或事物的普遍取向或偏好。主題句則開宗明義,明確提出作者的立場,觀點(diǎn),取向或偏好。
II.首段常用句型
1.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthat----Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-----Thereisnodobtthat------Itistruethat----
-----aregettingtheirwaysintoourdailylife.
E.g.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthatmoderntechnologyhasbenefitedhumanbeings.
2.Nowadays,therearesome/differentwaystodo---,suchasAandB.Butwhenitcomesto---
E.g.Nowadays,therearetwowaystoentertainourselves,suchaswatchingTVathomeandgoingtomovieswhenwearefree.
3.Withtherapiddevelopmentof…,..….is/areplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartin…today
4.Therehasalwaysbeen/usedtobeaheateddiscussionoverwhetherAismoreimportantthanB.
5.ThosewhoareinfavorofAhavetheirownreasons,whileothersargue/contendthat---.Somepeopletendtofavor---,but/while/meanwhile/onthecontraryothers-----.E.g.Somepeopleprefertravelingalone,butothersliketravelingwithfriends.
6.AlthoughA----,IlikedoingB---
Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopletendto/preferto--,I’minfavorof---Iagreewiththeformeronesomehow.
Inmypointofview,Ilikeoutdoorexercisesmuchmorethanindooractivities.
E.g.AlthoughmanypeopletendtofavorTVprogram,Ilikegoingtomovies.
E.g.Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopleprefertotraveltogetherwithfriends,I’minfavoroftravelingalone.
7.Butinmyopinion,bothAandBareessential.
Personally,IprefertostrikeabalancebetweenAandB.Asforme,I’minfavorofacombinationofAandB.IprefertocombineAandB.
AandBareofthesame/equalimportance.
WhileIattachmuchimportancetoA,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetodo----
E.g.WhileIattachmuchimportancetoindooractivites,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetotakepartinoutdooractivities.
(五)模板
1.Itisgenerallyacceptedthat-------areanindispensablepartofourdailylife,butwhenitcomesto-------,therehassprungupaheateddiscussionasto-----.Asforme,Ipreferto--------
2.Peopleallknowthat-------isveryimportant,however,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowards------.Somepeoplesaywe’dbetter--------,onthecontrary,othersbelievethatwewould----------.ButasfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferabalancebetweenthetwo.
3.Itisoftendifficultfor--------todecidewhetherAorB.However,immyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.
4.ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAansBhavemeritsanddemerits.
5.Whichismoreimportantinlife,-------,or-------?Theanswermayvaryfrompersontoperson.Butinmyopinion,theyofthesameimportance.
6.-----isveryimportantbothinthepastandpresent.Withthedevelopmentof----,----.
(Communicationisveryimportantbothinthepastandatpresent.Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,letterscanbesentmuchmorequicklythaneverbefore,butwhenthetelephoneappeared,mostpeoplehaveturnedtoit.)
7.-----aregettingtheirwayintopeople’slives.ThosewhoarefavorofAarguethat----whileotherpeoplethink-------.
8.Nowdays,theinfluenceof-----provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto-------.
對比型作文結(jié)尾段落
模式一結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+強(qiáng)調(diào)被肯定事物的積極作用等
1.Iprefertravelingindividually,becauseformetohaveaholidaytouristoenjoyandrelaxmysylf,andtorelaxthoroughly,freedomisofessence.Ifyoulosethefreedomofaction,itisnolongeraholidayinanythingbutname.
2.Fromtheabovecomparisonandcontrast,wecancometotheconclusionthatthecityisstillabetterchoiceforchildren’seducation,thoughsomedisadvantagesdoexist.Onlyincitiescanchildrenbewellpreparedfortheirfuturelifeandkeepupwiththetrendoftheworld.
3.Iregardroomingtogetherasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayoflearningcooperationandunderstanding.AndIconfidentlybelievethatsuchexperiencewillbehelpfulinone’slaterlife.
4.Therefore,Istronglyadvocatecommunicatingbyletter.Anditwillprovetobeoneofthewaystobeindependentfromtelephonewhenyoupickupyourpentowritealetter.
5.Inaword,determinationisthekeytosuccess.Withastrongdeterminationonecannotonlybringhisopportunitiesintofullplay,butconquerwhateverhardshipsordangershemayface.
6.Inaword,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity,butwithoutgreateffortswecanhardlygetsuchachoice.Ifwecannotobtainboth,inmyopinion,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajor.
常用句型
1)Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors/GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined/Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Nowaftercloseexamination/Forthereasonsgivenabove,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusion/wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusion/Iprefer/Istronglyrecommendthat___.
2)Inmyopinion,weshouldplacemuchemphasisontheimportanceof___.3)Inshort,Isupportthestatementthatitisbetterto____because____.
模式二結(jié)尾段=讓步句+呼應(yīng)主題句
1.Indooractivitiesaresomewhatchallengingaswell,forexample,chessandbookreadingcanalsodevelopourmind.HoweverIstillpreferoutdooractivities,fortheyteachmehowtobeastrongman,bothinhealthandinspirit.
2.Ofcourse,travelingalonehasitsownmerits:youcanchangeyourdestinationatanytimeandstayinoneplaceaslongasyoulike.ButIstillliketotravelwithfriends,becauseIthinkthatthemostimportantthingduringtravelistogetpleasureansrelaxation,andwithfriends,Icangetallthesethingseasily.常用句型
1)Inspiteofthesaidadvantagesof____,Iwillchoose____
2)Ofcourse,____hasitsmerits.ButI’mstillinfavoroftravelingalone___.
3)Both____and____havetheirownadvantages.Forexample,____,while____.Comparingthosetwo,however,Ipreferto____.
中立型結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+一句話總結(jié)(總結(jié)所比較對象最突出的優(yōu)點(diǎn),可用while,whereas連接)
1.Ipreferabalanceoftheseactivities.Inmyopinion,physicalrecreationisnecessaryforgoodhealthbutintellectualpursuitsprovidemorepleasure.
2.Bothbookknowledgeandpersonalexperienceareessential.Whileexperiencemakesonemoreresourceful,bookknowledgemakesonemorelearned.
Therefore,weneedboth___and___.Theformer___,andthelatter___
3.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe…weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblemsandthenmaketherightdecision.
4.Personally,Ithinknothingwillbesorewardingthancombiningselectivereadingandextensivereading.Asfarasbadbooksareconcerned,weshouldneverreadthem,butasforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..
5.Inmyopinion,weshouldbothreadselectivelyandextensivelyaswell.Withbadbooks,weshouldneverreadthem,butforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..
6.Despitethefactthatthemajorityofpeoplepreferadvertisements,I’minfavorofagoodcombinationofadsandqualityofproducts.Onlyinsuchawaycouldwepromotethesalessuccessfully.
7.Inaword,wemustlearntobebothcooperativeandcompetitiveinordertosucceedinlife.Whatweneedtolearniswhentobecooperatioveandwhentobecompetitive.Thesecretof___liesinthecombinationofboth___and___.
擴(kuò)展閱讀:比較型作文
201*英語四級寫作訓(xùn)練(二):比較型作文之1
來源:日期:201*-10-06閱讀
21次作者:NB
比較型作文之8分作文
比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中,作者不發(fā)表個(gè)人意見,在文中不體現(xiàn)個(gè)人取向,單純以說明介紹為目的。
在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的,一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
一、傾向型比較論說文
1.、首段=引言+主題句
引言句(第一句):引出比較的對象
主題句(第二句):提出主題,明確表明作者的個(gè)人取向與偏好。2、主體部分
對比點(diǎn)的筆墨分配:應(yīng)有所側(cè)重,對于作者持否定態(tài)度的事物的優(yōu)勢要少寫,而肯定的事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)則要多用筆墨,對于其缺點(diǎn)則可輕描淡寫、一筆帶過。3、結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+強(qiáng)調(diào)被肯定事物的積極作用等第一句:呼應(yīng)主題句
第二句:可以用一句話歸納被肯定事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)等。
結(jié)尾段=讓步句+呼應(yīng)主題句
第一句:以讓步的口吻,提出被否定事物的一個(gè)小優(yōu)點(diǎn)第二句:筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),用一句話歸納并突出被肯定事物的重大優(yōu)點(diǎn),進(jìn)一步確定自己的選擇,與主題句相互照應(yīng)。
二、中立型比較論說文
首段和主體部分與傾向型比較論說文相同,而結(jié)尾段一般采用簡化總結(jié)模式:結(jié)尾段=呼應(yīng)主題句+一句話總結(jié)第一句:呼應(yīng)主題句
第二句:總結(jié)所比較對象最突出的優(yōu)點(diǎn),可用while,whereas連接萬能模板:
傾向型
1.有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)住宿應(yīng)該獨(dú)處一室2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該與同學(xué)合住3.我的觀點(diǎn)
Itisoftendifficultfor______todecidewhetherAorB.Inmyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.
Somestudentsdon"tlikeB.First,theythink______because______.Second,_______.Third,_________.TheincomparableadvantageofAisthat
___________.First,___________.Second,________.Third,________.IregardAasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayof___________.AndIconfidentlybelievethat_______.中立型1.有人喜歡鄉(xiāng)村生活2.有人喜歡都市生活3.我的觀點(diǎn)
ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAandBhavemeritsanddemerits.
Firstandforemost,__________.Moreover,____________.Lastbutnotleast,_______.
Onthecontrary_________.Inaddition,___________.What’sthecommonest,________
Either___________ora_______gives_________.Ibelieve__________
引出不同觀點(diǎn):
1、People’sviewson…varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat….However,othersbelievethat….人們對…的觀點(diǎn)因人而異.有些人認(rèn)為…..然而其他人卻認(rèn)為...
2、Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson…人們對…可能會有不同的見解.
3、Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人們對待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.
4、Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto…關(guān)于….人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同.
5、Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).對(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同.結(jié)尾:
1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…
把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會得出結(jié)論…
2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…
考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會得出合理的結(jié)論…
3、Hence/Therefore,we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此,我們最好得出這樣的結(jié)論…
4、Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫無疑問,跳槽有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn).
5、Allinall,wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.
總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時(shí),我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現(xiàn)的新問題.
比較型連接詞:like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally.
比較型常用句型:
1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.
3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...4.Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...5.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.6.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.7.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.8.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.
9.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.10.AandBdifferinseveralways.
11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.13.ThesameistrueofB.
14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.
15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...
四六級考試加分句型:
1.It作先行主語和先行賓語的一些句型。Shehadsaidwhatitwasnecessarytosay.
2.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。Itisnotwhorulesusthatisimportant,buthowherulesus.
3."All+抽象名詞"或"抽象名詞+itself"(very+形容詞)。Hewasallgentlenesstoher.
4.利用詞匯重復(fù)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。Acrimeisacrimeacrime.5."something(much)of"和"nothing(little)of"
"somethingof"相當(dāng)于"tosomeextent",表示程度。在疑問句或條件從句中,則為"anythingof",可譯為"有點(diǎn)","略微等。""譯為毫無","全無"。"muchof"譯為"大有","notmuchof"可譯為"算不上","稱不上","littleof"可譯為"幾乎無"。somethinglike譯為"有點(diǎn)像,略似。"
Theysaythathehadnouniversityeducation,butheseemstobesomethingofascholar.
訓(xùn)練:提綱:
1.有人認(rèn)為類似于因特網(wǎng)的高科技產(chǎn)品會代替書籍2.有人認(rèn)為傳統(tǒng)的信息產(chǎn)品書籍不會被取代3.我的看法。
這也是模板哦!
Nowadays,theinfluenceof____________provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto___________.(引出話題和爭論,但保留作者個(gè)人看法)
Peopleinfavorof_________alwaysprovidethefollowing
evidence.Firstly,__________.Secondly,__________.Finally,____________.(偏愛書籍的理由)
Conversely,asforthemeritsof___________,inthefirstplace,________.Secondly,____________.Atthesametime,__________.(英特網(wǎng)等現(xiàn)代科技的優(yōu)點(diǎn))
Inshort,Iagreethat_________.(明確提出觀點(diǎn))大家可以選一段練習(xí)
具體要求:
首段:引出關(guān)于因特網(wǎng)對現(xiàn)代社會的影響+關(guān)于因特網(wǎng)和書籍話題存在的爭論
主體段落一:有人偏愛閱讀傳統(tǒng)信息媒體,如書籍原因1:人類文明的歷史就是書寫的歷史原因2:人們可以隨處用自己喜歡的姿勢閱讀原因3:書寫形式更有利于安全保存信息主體段落二:如因特網(wǎng)之類的現(xiàn)代技術(shù)手段的優(yōu)點(diǎn)
優(yōu)點(diǎn)1:新科技的出現(xiàn)歷來都回給人類生活帶來許多好處優(yōu)點(diǎn)2:電腦新科技的出現(xiàn),使信息儲備量大大提高優(yōu)點(diǎn)3:電腦新科技的出現(xiàn),使信息處理的效率提高了結(jié)尾段::因特網(wǎng)最終會代替書籍等信息手段
參考答案:
Nowadays,theinfluenceofInternetprovestobeprofound.AndtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateastowhetherornotInternetwillreplacethebookasthemainsourceofinformation.
Peopleinfavorofthetraditionalinformationsourcesalwaysprovidethefollowingevidence.Firstly,thehistoryofhumancivilizationisthewrittenhistory.Secondly,peoplearefreetochooseanypostureandplacethatmakesthemcomfortablewhenreading.Finally,traditionalinformationsoureceslikebooksarerelativelystableandreliabletopreservethehumaninformationwell.
Conversely,asforthemeritsofmoderntechnologies,inthefirstplace,inhistory,wecanseethateverynewtechnologybringsaboutgreatchangestoourlife.Secondly,moderntechnologylikecomputersisanothergreatinventionthatcanstoreahugeamountofdata.Atthesametime,Weareabletoprocessthedatamorerapidlyandaccuratelythanwecaneverimagine.
Inshort,Iagreethatmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,willcomedayreplacethewrittenwordasthemainsourceofinformation.Therefore,Iameagerlylookingforwardtothatday.
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